Good Men in a Bad Time

Most young men are pricks. Swaggering, angry, ill-tempered, ill-mannered, rude little pricks.

As a young man (well, young-ish) I feel entitled to make this statement.

As I was leaving the locker-room of my gym yesterday I overheard two young men (younger than me by more than a few years) having a boisterous conversation about the muffins they stole from the school cafeteria, the weed they smoked that got them “dude…high as fuck!”, and what they would do to the girl at the front counter of the gym if they were able to get her alone for 5 minutes. I introduced myself, told them thievery, drug trafficking and possible sexual assault were not appropriate topics of conversation for a public venue (especially while standing in front of a cop), and left them a little pale, and a little worried.

When I was young I, too, was boisterous, filled with bravado, and walked around with my chest puffed out a little more than was wise. But if my old man had caught me talking like that in any place, public or private, he’d have waited until I was asleep (since I was bigger than him by the time I was 16), and then beat me with a pillowcase filled with bricks. I learned at a young age not to swear at people, to hold the door open for old ladies, and to stop and lend a hand when you saw someone with a flat tire. People don’t do that anymore.

I have to ask myself, where do these young men get the impression that what they are doing is acceptable? Who has taught them to act like this?

As I look around I find myself in a world where there are plenty of role models, all slapped up on billboards, television, the internet and any other medium that popular media can cram a picture onto. But all these role models are bad. The people most glorified are the ones who make the biggest asses of themselves, and win fame through behaving at their absolute worst.

I’ve ranted before about reality television, but it seems even the fictional characters are bad. There has been a lot of discussion in the literary world recently about the “Grim-dark” genre of fantasy, where the world is basically an awful place and everyone, even if they’re good, has to be just as awful to survive.

Television is filled with Grim-Dark characters; Shows like “Breaking Bad”, “The Sopranos”, “Sons of Anarchy”, “Mad Men” and several other titles make heroes of people who are often sneaks, cheats, drunks, drug dealers and ruthless killers – even if they are killing for the “Right Reasons”. As entertaining as all these shows are, and I watch them just as much as anyone, I have to ask if there is anything positive to be gained from them?

And, as I think about it, I must say yes, yes there is.

One thing we know, from sales statistics and surveys, is that the majority of books are purchased and consumed by female readers, and I’m not just talking about titles like “50 Shades of Grey” and “Twilight”, I mean everything. 

As I’ve said before, I think it is through story that our life lessons are imparted upon us. It is through our individual processing of the stories we are told, read and watch that we build the foundation of the people we want to be.

So, what is the benefit of stories about horrible people doing things, you ask me? There are two main positives for Grim-Dark stories.

First: they draw the attention of these young men, which causes them to actually read a book, or more often to pay attention to something that isn’t “Jersey Shore”. This, I think, is vitally important. Young people, and young men especially, don’t read enough. If you ask the average high school student to read something out loud to you you’re likely to get a lot of stuttering and the sounding out of any words that contain more than one syllable. If stories that involve a lot of stabbing and several graphic sex scenes are what it takes to get a kid to start reading, then by the fuck bring ‘em on!

Second: Because Grim-Dark stories are so bleak, any altruistic act of goodness, or even simple kindness, really stands out. It is a big deal to the reader because the author makes it a big deal in the context of the story. If a good deed is such an attention getter in a dark story, then hopefully the person reading it will learn a bit of a lesson.

A fairly significant quantity of the stories I read when I was a kid, and even what I read now, involved good for good’s sake. The protagonist is on a quest to set the world right, because that is what he ought to do; it is not a simple matter of survival, but something he feels compelled to do because of his innate nature. These are the stories I like to read, and they’re also the kind of stories I like to write.

Is this kind of behaviour unrealistic? Well it certainly seems to be in the world we live in now.

During the course of my “day job” I see constant examples of how the world is going for an absolute shit, but I was warned by my best friend’s old man when I joined the Force 10 years ago: “The only time good people need the police is when something bad happens to them”, and truer words were never spoken. So, perhaps because of my work experience my view is a little skewed, but I really worry about future generations, and how absolutely awful some people can be. Or, perhaps even worse, how much people don’t care about anything but themselves.

Can the answer to the world’s problems all be solved with a few good stories? While I would like to think so, I’m a little doubtful. But it seems like there is nothing to guide young people, young men specifically, when it comes to the way they ought to behave, and if one good story can steer one young man in the right direction, then I say it’s worth writing no matter what genre it’s in.

Where ever you are reading this, I hope you’re surrounded by people who don’t suck.

Let me know if you have any ideas, and thanks for reading.



Filed under Uncategorized

6 responses to “Good Men in a Bad Time

  1. Linda F

    Hey, Tyner, Linda here -we worked together at the Lavington Market. What u say is so true. Young guys need good role models – coach, teacher, uncle, (or the upstanding local constable !) By modelling proper conduct and values day by day, they can have a very positive influence. You never know who is watching. Speaking of “Watch” I hope we will see a sequel ! Maybe reading about the adventures of the mighty Quinn can help steer some errant young knave aright.
    There is still a lot of good out there , so don’t lose heart. Keep fighting the good fight!
    Cheers, warrior.

    • Linda,

      It is fantastic to hear from you. I have the first draft of the sequel to The Watch completed, and I’m currently working on the editing process. I am totally unsure when it’ll come out.

      When I write my stories I always write what I want to read, because at the end of the day the story-teller has to entertain themselves first, otherwise the story will be no good. I write about good people doing the right thing, and if that helps steer someone right, or provide a good role model, then I guess I have done my job well.

      Thanks for stopping by,

  2. Deborah

    Tyner, after watching the news last night, I could not agree with you more about how some people are plain awful. That said, many, many more are wonderful, yourself included. I am fortunate enough to be the mother of three sons, each good kids–as attested by Other people, me being slightly biased–and to be honest, I credit their goodness to their fathers (my ex is the father of my eldest boy); they, like your father, provided the role-model–and bricks–the boys needed when testosterone, peers, and media tempted. Too many kids in our double-income, disposable-everything including marriage society, are raising themselves, their lives void of positive–firm–role models, their time consumed with violent, expletive peppered, video games. The answer? Mentors, and authors–and maybe one day a father–like you. Men who exemplify courtesy and respect and not only encourage it, but expect it, from their children–without violence–but through modeling, conversation, praise and recognition passed on on fishing expeditions, camping trips, and early morning drives to hockey or lacrosse practice. When people feel good about themselves, and are engaged in activities that build skill and confidence, they’re more likely to extend that confidence and goodness to other people. Take care!

  3. Tyner,
    I’ve had the honor of reading most of your posts and we seem to see the world through a very similar set of goggles. This however is one of the few times I’m drawn to disagree with you. First, “you are what you eat…” isn’t only true regarding food. What we ingest with our eyes we park in our souls and it becomes part of us. In the IT industry we call that GIGO or garbage in and garbage out. If young men (and or women) read filth and degradation that is what they harvest and invariably become. It is only through the process of edification that anyone breaks true carnal fortitudes, habits, and cultures to become something or someone worth while. Many of the young hoods you reflect on are merely the product of pathetic or nonexistent parenting. You make a point, if many of these young men had a Dad with a sack of bricks looming over their bed, they would have a cause to give second and third thought to the idiocy that runs through their minds and out into public.

    My Dad was a soldier in several wars and a drill sergeant to boot. He had a zero tolerance for insolence and had a remarkable way of creating significant emotional events to re-enforce our character building. In truth today what we call harsh treatment I am very thankful for in that it propelled me beyond insolence and self absorbance and into a mode where consideration and thoughtfulness helped craft a better person. He has only become a friend in later years but all and all, I am glad I had a father and guide rather than a chum.

    I appreciate your letter though… I am sorry that as a profession you have to constantly look at the darker elements of life… I have been a teacher and have now lived long enough and been blessed enough to have kept in touch with many of the young men and young women I have taught and they have become a choice and incredible people. Not everything is black there are still many carrying a torch in dark surroundings… Take a look, you’ll be surprised.

    • Patrick,
      Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts with me, I’m glad to hear them.

      I think what you say has validity. We are a product of our raising, and as a quote I saw a couple days ago said “I did not create myself, I am the sum and total of everyone I have ever met”…or something to that effect.

      I do not think all is lost. I’ve seen shining examples of positive humanity in my job, but they are an exception rather than a rule, so they are a little surprising when I come across them.

      I’m going to re-read your reply and then think on it some more.

      Thanks for weighing in,

      • Thanks for your comments… I did want you to know that you have inspired me to once again pursue writing. Your voice is important and the role you play in protecting society is both difficult and important as well. I’m glad you share your social commentary with us. It makes me think and propels me forward.

        Keep plugging!

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s